Well, after reviewing the critique I got from the self-published book contest, I decided to rewrite my first book – Crossbow Revenge.
The reviewer thought I wrote my earlier version too much like a screen play instead of a novel. The reviewer wanted the characters to tell the story more than some all seeing being. So, I rewrote it, using more dialogue this time. Added a few more pages to it also.
This version is available at amazon.com and Kindle Direct Publishing.