Crossbow Revenge – 3rd Editon

Well, after reviewing the critique I got from the self-published book contest, I decided to rewrite my first book – Crossbow Revenge.

The reviewer thought I wrote my earlier version too much like a screen play instead of a novel.  The reviewer wanted the characters to tell the story more than some all seeing being.  So, I rewrote it, using more dialogue this time.  Added a few more pages to it also.

This version is available at amazon.com and Kindle Direct Publishing.

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